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Karina


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I'm in the works of getting an interview for the position I applied for within my company.  I wanted to send the buyer a note, introducing myself.


So far, this is what I have down:


Hi Dave,


I wanted to introduce myself to you, I'm applying for the open position that you are hiring for. I currently have been with Planning and Allocation for 1.5 years, and I have had experience doing forecasting, planning and allocation. I am looking to pursue a buying career in the future, and wanted to apply for this position to get more exposure and to gain knowledge. Enclosed is my resume, and I hope to meet with you soon.


Thank you


This is the job description:


This person will support a Category Manager with purchasing merchandise in a particular category. Responsibilities include: working to ensure the best customer experience on line, selecting and buying merchandise, fostering positive vendor relationships through effective communication and follow-up, driving category expansion, Maintaining clean files and records, item set up and maintenance, sample center discrepancies and Amazon.com catalog issues.


 


I was wondering if I should add anything else in the email, or change anything around.. maybe add that I have experience doing X that is in the job description.


 


Thanks!


 



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honey


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looks good! i would make a minor change.  good luck! 


Hi Dave,


I wanted to introduce myself to you, I'm applying for the (put name/title of position just in case there's more than one)  position you are hiring for. I currently have been with Planning and Allocation for 1.5 years, and I have had experience doing forecasting, planning and allocation. I am looking to pursue a buying career in the future, and wanted to apply for this position to get more exposure and to gain knowledge. Enclosed is my resume, and I hope to meet with you soon.



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